Night Mistress

it sounds good to me. good ahead with her, because it will keep bugging you if you don't do it.

it seem interesting. i have to read more to understand was is going on though. i hope you put another piece soon.

oh wow, this was so sad. i hate reading stuff like this, but sometime, you need to read stuff like this to know the love is not all fun and ...

oh wow. this is different. i will have to continue to look for the another piece for you story. i like it. keep up the good work.

oh wow. this is very good. one thing though: how did Lana get AIDS? Was she born with it? or did something else happen? i hope you post another piece ...

anyone at all read this series?

anyone?

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There. I have edited again. I took some of the suggestion and I didn't. Please don't get offensive if i didn't use what you want me to. If you still ...

anyone else?

you will hate the thrid one. i hate it with a passion.

No, i don't think the ending was chessy. i thought it fit the story.

this remind of Katy Perry's 'I kissed a girl.' I loved it and i think you should continue it, because you have a great story line. welll, i just hope ...

well post it then. please.

There. I have edited. I took some of the suggestion and I didn't. Please don't get offensive if i didn't use what you want me to. If you still find ...